约翰·法萨诺版《异形3》原始剧本翻译

化不肥

这个轨道器由于后来被发现的原因，被用木板包裹起来。
This orbiter, for reasons to be discovered later, has been sheathed in wood.


约翰
JOHN


走到内陆海的岸边，坐在一片光秃秃的木头上，抬起头来。他的眼睛渐渐习惯了——
Walks to the shore of an inland SEA. Sits on a bare patch of wood. Looks up. His eyes grow accustomed to --


夜空-约翰·波夫
THE NIGHT SKY - JOHN POV


布满雀斑似的微小光点。群星，遍布这漆黑的虚空。用它们的天光沐浴阿克森的外表。
Freckled with tiny dots of light. Stars. Spread across the inky void. Bathe Arceon's surface with their celestial glow.


约翰对着马蒂亚斯微笑，深呼吸着。这里的空气更稀薄，但更加新鲜。他打开书，大声朗读——
John smiles at Mattias, breathes deep. The atmosphere up here is thinner, but fresher. He opens the book. Reads aloud --


约翰：
JOHN
“在耶稣纪元1348年，我，小兄弟会修道院的杰哈多兄弟。帮忙埋葬了修道院长和我的六十个僧侣同伴。日复一日，一个接一个地死去，直到我是唯一一个离开的人，只要我能忍受就待在那里，接着我的狗——”
In the year of our Lord 1348 I, Brother Gerhado of the Minorite Abbey helped bury the Abbot and my sixty fellow monks, day by day, one by one, until I am the only one left. I stayed as long as I could bear it, then with my dog --
到这部分时马蒂亚斯竖起耳朵，这是他最喜欢的部分。
Mattias lifts his ears at this part. His favorite part.


约翰：
JOHN
“――逃走了。我把这个放在羊皮纸上，以免这瘟疫——这黑死病——逗留在我手上。
- fled. I have put this to parchment lest this pestilence - this Black Death - stay my hand.
（停顿）
(beat)
这是由另一只手完成的……”
This was finished by another hand...”


约翰把书合上。某物吸引了他的目光——在天上无数光点中的东西。在数百万英里远处：
John closes the book. Something catches his eye -- Something among the myriad points of light in the sky. Millions of miles away:


群星中的一颗
ONE OF THE STARS


比其余的更明亮。移动中，快到足以留下微小的痕迹。穿过了星星，接着落下……一颗彗星。
Brighter than the rest. MOVING. Fast enough to leave a faint trail. Across the stars. And down...A comet.


约翰站起来，观察着——
John stands. Watches --

化不肥

先来欣赏一些概念图吧，我在外网找到的，有很多来自vincentwardfilms网，这网站的概念图都打着水印让我这个强迫症非常不爽（图的版权是他们的？），所以费力去掉了，为了不破坏原图我已经很尽力了，所以有些图留有或多或少的水印痕迹。







淳朴的木制星球阿克森

化不肥

一些震撼的东西，先不剧透了。

化不肥

那星星
THE STAR

越来越亮，拉得更近了。
Growing brighter. Drawing nearer.

约翰
JOHN

跟着另外三个僧侣，他们比他大。这四个人看着天空……
Joined by three other MONKS. They are older than he. The Four men watch the sky...

那星星
THE STAR

仍然更明亮，更靠近。
Brighter still. Closer.

更多僧侣
MORE MONKS

从两打到一百，他们从行星地表走了出来，走出木制的活板门，跟着其他人过来。几天过去了，现在是三百人了。他们脖子向后仰，目瞪口呆。一个字幕来指出……
Two dozen. A hundred. They come up through the planet's surface. Out of wooden trap doors. Join the others. Days pass. Now three hundred. Necks bowed back. Mouths agape. A SUBTITLE identifies...

宗教殖民地阿克森
RELIGIOUS COLONY ARCEON
-----------------------
人口：350个流放者
POPULATION: 350 Exiles
罪行：政治异端
CRIME: Political Heresy

那星星
THE STAR

照亮了天空。当它撞击这类行星的大气层时，燃烧得更加明亮。
Fills the sky. Burns brighter still as it hits the planetoid's atmosphere.

在阿克森的地表
ON THE SURFACE OF ARCEON

数以百计的僧侣在那艘船――那星星咆哮于他们头上时，遮住他们的眼睛。火焰蔓延着——
Hundreds of Monks shield their eyes as the ship -- the star -- ROARS over their heads. Trailing FIRE --

约翰举起他的双手，去触摸星星，当那星星擦过他的手时皮肤起水泡了，他转过身来看着它如弧线般地坠下——
John holds up his hands - to touch a star -- Skin BLISTERS as it passes over him, He turns and watches as it -- Arcs downward --

落入大海
INTO THE SEA

撞击声―“嘶嘶嘶嘶嘶嘶嘶嘶嘶嘶”！几股蒸汽升到空气中，水沸腾了。鱼儿浮到水面上，肿胀、死亡。
WHOMP- SSSSSSSSSSS --!! PLUMES of steam rise into the air. The water boils. Fish bob to the surface. Bloated. Dead.

化不肥

约翰
JOHN

是最先到达岸边的。皮革制和木制的小型渔船们在湖上摇荡，他的小圆舟是第一个下水的。其他人在他身后紧跟着，他听不见警告的呼喊声。
Is the first to hit the shore. Small leather and wood fishing boats tossed by the wake. His coracle is the first into the water. The others running up behind him. He cannot hear the SHOUTS of warning.

在海上―黎明
ON THE SEA - DAWN

太阳在黑色的水面上映出。约翰的双手在划动粗木浆，起泡的手掌张开后鲜血直流。他从长袍上撕出一块布——用他的牙齿撕下来，裹住血淋淋的手。继续划船。
The sun cracks over the black water. John's hands move the rough wooden oars. Blistered palm opens. BLOOD flows. He tears off a piece of his cassock -- Rips it with his teeth -- Wraps the bloody hand. Rows.

那星星
THE STAR

是飞船，是星际飞船苏拉科号的4号逃生船在水面上摇晃，白色的金属表皮因高温变黑。
Ship. Star Ship. Sulaco escape vehicle #4 rocks on the water. White metal skin blackened by the heat.

约翰
JOHN

向右划到那船，他的小圆舟在波涛汹涌的浪涛中颠簸。他爬到飞船破裂的顶盖表面上。从踉跄到平衡――挪动到那明显的舱门。四处寻找门把手，一个把手――
Rows right into it. His coracle pitches in the choppy surf. He scrambles onto the ship's cracked tile surface. Teeters -- balances -- moves to the unmistakeable HATCH. Looks around for a knob, a handle --

在舱口旁边
NEXT TO THE HATCH

一个有着黑色和黄色条纹的表示紧急状态的小板门。约翰踌躇地打开门，露出了一个闪亮的金属操作杆。他盯着它……迟疑了一会儿，然后迅速把它拉下来……“呜呜呜嘶嘶”！船壳的门打开了。
A small panel door whose black and yellow stripes denote urgency. John hesitantly opens the door, revealing a shiny metal LEVER. He stares at it...a beat. Then quickly pulls it down... WUORRRRSH -! Hull door OPENS.

门口是一个黑色的“大嘴”。约翰在他身上画十字，开始把他的脚搭到舱口――
The doorway is a black maw. John crosses himself. Begins to lower his foot into the hatch --

凯尔（画外音/独白）：
KYLE O/S
“注意点”
Watch it!

他差点从船上摔下来，回头看——
He almost falls backwards off the ship. Looks back --

化不肥

其他僧侣
THE OTHER MONKS

正在迅速逼近中，凯尔抓狂地假设――
Are rapidly approaching. Kyle postulates wildly --

凯尔：
KYLE
“约翰！等等――别进去！”
John! Wait -- ! Don't go in!

约翰回到敞开的舱门，机器使空气再循环流出。他感觉到了空气流动在他脸部的皮肤上，好凉好凉，是人造的。它呼唤着他走了进来，被那黑暗吞噬――
John turns back to the open hatch. Machine recirculated air flows out. He feels it on the skin of his face. Cool. Cool, and artificial. It calls to him. He steps in. Swallowed by the blackness --

“呼”―“哐啷”！门在他身后关闭了。
WHOOSH-CLANG -! The door closes behind him.

内景：苏拉克号的四号逃生分离船―昼
INT. SULACO ESCAPE POD #4 - DAY

一片漆黑，昏暗的红灯。约翰一动不动，同时他的双眼也在适应着这黑暗。他看到：
Dark. Dim red lights. John stands still as his eyes adjust to the darkness. He sees:

纽特的冬眠舱
NEWT'S HYPER SLEEP TUBE

一个由玻璃和金属制成的棺材――输气管盘绕在其基座，玻璃罩已经破了。一个小小的红灯在舱头闪烁――一个如同你安全带的柔和的声音、语调在警告中――是听得出来的……
A glass and metal COFFIN -- pneumatic piping twines around its base. The glass lid is BROKEN. A Small RED LIGHT pulses at the head of the tube -- a soft VOICE and TONE, like your seat belt warning -- is audible...

电脑语音：
COMPUTER VOICE
（低声）
(sotto)
“密封破损，密封破损……”
Seal broken...seal broken...

约翰发现自己正朝着那舱子走去，透过破裂的罩子看着：
John finds himself moving towards the tube...Looks through the broken lid:

在那舱中
IN THE TUBE

在白色的无菌舱室内有一滩溅落的血迹，使原来的白色变成锈棕色。无论这里发生了什么，都是不久前发生的。铁锈色的水滴滴落到――
There is a splattered BLOOD STAIN on the sterile white interior. OLD, turned rust-brown. Whatever happened here happened a while ago. Rust colored drips trail down to --

地板上
THE FLOOR

有拖曳痕迹。他的目光顺着这污迹看到一堆扔在控制面板上的沾满血污的衣服，一件被撕破的连衣裤，儿童尺寸的。一个儿童玩偶的头，但找不到身体。
Drag marks. His eyes follow the stains to a pile of Bloody clothing against a control panel. A jumpsuit. Torn. Child size. The head of child's DOLL, but no body to be found.

化不肥

约翰
JOHN

回头望着门，他有点想从这鬼地方出去了，但他击退了他的恐惧。他是一个医生――或者正尝试成为的――这里可能有需要他帮助的人。他向前走去——把他的视线从那衣服上移开，直到闪闪发光的仪表盘和它们无数的――
Looks back towards the door. Part of him wants to get the hell out of here -- but he fights back his fear. He is a doctor - or trying to be - someone in here may need his help. He presses forward -- Averts his gaze from the clothing, UP to the blinking and glowing instrument panels and their myriad --

灯
LIGHTS

压力灯、数据灯、警报灯，这成千上万的灯如同天空中的星星。
Pressure lights. Data lights. Warning lights. Thousands of lights. Like the stars in the sky.

他已几十年没见到这样的科技了，且从来没有这么接近过。他走进船的更深处，他的恐惧现在被着迷取代了，沿着这些灯……
It's been decades since he's seen technology like this -- and never this close up. He steps further into the ship, his fear now replaced by fascination, follows the lights....

在一个淡绿色屏幕上
ON A PALE GREEN SCREEN

LED数字频繁出现――7291.01.05…06…07
LED numbers race -- 7,291.01.05...06...07
一段文字识别出“自从分离以来的过去。”
A Legend identifies "Elapsed since separation."
他继续前进……
He moves on...

一个视频监控器
A VIDEO MONITOR

通过用来显示的扫描棒，一个图像出现：一个女人和一个站在她面前的少女，那个女人的双臂绕在女孩身上，保护性、母性的表现。
Through scanning bars of show, an image: A WOMAN with a YOUNG GIRL standing in front of her. The Woman's arms are wrapped around the girl. Protective. Maternal.

这女人说话了，她的留言不断重复。是一个磁带环，虽然约翰不知道那是什么。
The Woman speaks. Her message repeats itself. A tape loop, although John has no idea what that is.

女人：
WOMAN
“……正乘坐四号分离船。SS苏拉可号船员和所有的陆战队突击兵都死了，船上的传感器已经中断了冬眠期。一个被忽视的异形卵已经打开，主教和希克斯被杀了。异形们侵占了巡洋舰，纽特和我正乘坐四号分离船。SS苏拉可……”
...taking pod four. The Crew of the SS Sulaco and all Marine commandoes are dead. Ship's sensors have interrupted the hyper sleep cycle. An overlooked alien egg has hatched. Bishop and Hicks have been killed. Xenomorphs have infested the cruiser. Newt and I are taking pod four. The Crew of...

――――――――――――
PS：“SS”应该是“Space Ship”或者“Star Ship”的缩写，这类缩写在翻译时通常是照搬原文，所以我采用原文缩写形式。

化不肥

这女人留言的警告语调重新点燃了约翰的恐惧。他更加犹豫地在船檐徘徊，顺着闪烁仪器的踪迹——被吸引着去碰了一个按钮，点击……
The WARNING TONE of the Woman's message rekindles John's fear. He moves more hesitantly around the periphery of the ship, following the trail of blinking instruments -- Drawn to touch a button. Click...

某个东西像触手般地落到了他的肩膀上！原来就一个氧气面罩而已。
SOMETHING TENTACLE-LIKE DROPS DOWN ON HIS SHOULDER! Just an oxygen mask.

化不肥

当他推开这塑料制的悬荡物体时，约翰感觉到了他快速跳动的心脏，然后继续在飞船四周走去。他的手擦到了一个通过照明来回应的传感器，接着――
John feels his rapidly BEATING heart as he pushes aside the plastic, dangling object and continues around the shuttle. His hand brushes over a SENSOR which responds by lighting and --

“呼嘶嘶嘶嘶嘶嘶嘶嘶嘶”！一股氟利昂从头顶的管道射出，约翰大喊着并后退到……
HSSSSSSSSS -! A BLAST of freon shoots out of an overhead pipe -- John SHOUTS and back up into...

另一个冬眠舱！！！
ANOTHER HYPER SLEEP TUBE!!!

在纽特现在的空舱旁边，发出轻轻的嗡嗡声，仍在运转。约翰小心翼翼地靠近它，他能透过罩子辨认出乘客。
Next to Newt's now empty tube. Humming gently. Still operational. John approaches it cautiously. He can make out the occupant through the lid...

一个女人
A WOMAN

那屏幕上的女人，是雷普利，在冬眠中。穿着白色棉背心和拳击手式短裤。天哪，她看起来好漂亮。
The woman from the screen. This is RIPLEY. In hypersleep. Wearing a white cotton tank top and boxer-type shorts. Christ, she looks beautiful.

约翰从显示屏看着雷普利的形象，然后后退，恭敬地跪下双膝。迷恋又一次取代了恐惧，把他的脸移近罩子。更靠近她的……
John looks from Ripley to her image on the monitor, then back. Sinks to his knees, reverent. Fascination has replaced fear again. Moves his face closer to the lid. Closer to hers...

日光溢进——约翰的头如鞭笞般遮住光源——
DAYLIGHT spills in -- John's head WHIPS towards the source of the light --

这门
THE DOOR

打开了。是凯尔和其他僧侣。
Open. Kyle and the other monks.

凯尔：
KYLE
“约翰，这是什么，这是艘补给船吗？”
John - what is it? Is this a Supply ship?

约翰：
JOHN
“不，没有补给。凯尔，这里有人――”
No. No supplies. Kyle, there's someone in here --

第二个僧侣看着凯尔
The Second Monk looks at Kyle.

第二个僧侣：
SECOND MONK
“这是被禁止的。”
This is forbidden.

凯尔：
KYLE
“约翰，你就离开这鬼地方吧――”
John. Just get the hell out of there --

约翰：
JOHN
“我不想停留，我必须在这里沉没之前把她救出来。你进来，帮我一把――”
I don't want to stay. I have to get her out before this sinks. You come in, give me a hand --

化不肥

凯尔：
KYLE
“她？看看，这不是补给船。所以这是对我们禁止的科技，马上离开这里！”
Her? Look, this is not the supply ship, so this is technology forbidden to us. Get out of there now!

约翰低头看着雷普利。一个小键盘安装在舱头上。
John looks down at Ripely. A KEYPAD is mounted at the head of the tube.
一个红色按钮写着：“应急开启”
A red button: "EMERG-OPEN"
那很简单。
That's plain enough.

约翰：
JOHN
“好吧――”
All right --

他按下它，舱子随着一股压缩空气的响声打开，门口的僧侣反感这声音。
He presses it. The Tube opens with a loud BLAST of compressed air. The Monks at the door recoil at the sound.

镜头切换：
CUT TO:

外景：太空船―海面上―昼
EXT. SPACE SHIP - ON THE SEA - DAY

雷普利被放入一个大号的小圆舟里，约翰把她抱到他面前的位置。无意识的她脑袋跟着船在浪涛中摇晃，僧侣们开始划回岸边。
Ripley has been lowered into a large coracle. John holds her in front of him. Unconscious. Her head lolls as the boat rocks on the waves. The monks start to row back to shore.

第一个僧侣：
FIRST MONK
（虔诚的）
(reverent)
“一艘太空船……”
A space ship...

第二个僧侣：
SECOND MONK
（更虔诚的）
(even more reverent)
“一个女人……”
A woman...

凯尔：
KYLE
“你不应该进去的――”
You shouldn't have gone in --

约翰：
JOHN
“我假设着成为一个医生。”
I'm supposed to be a doctor.

他把雷普利的头发从额头上撩开。
He pushes Ripley's hair away from her forehead.

约翰：
JOHN
“她可能迷路了。”
She could've been lost.

第一个僧侣：
FIRST MONK
“很长时间以来，我也观察到了。”
Been a long time since I saw either.

第二个僧侣：
SECOND MONK
“它不会下沉，看看它，我们该拿它怎么办？”
It isn't sinking. Look at it. What are we supposed to do with it?

凯尔：
KYLE
“那里面是什么样的？”
What was it like in there --?